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    dots Submission Name: Alright (I Wanna Make Everything...)dots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 294
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 470
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    dotsAlright (I Wanna Make Everything...)dots
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    Alright... I wanna make everything...

    You're on top of the world,
    Looking down, you can see
    We have a problem with the way things are,
    You're on the top floor of this building,
    But you know you started out on the first one,
    You worked your way up,
    You worked so hard for your...
    Reserved parking spot
    And your brand new fancy automobile,
    But if it keeps you movin' along, then it's alright,
    But everytime you turn your cheek to that window,
    We can tell that you don't care about anyone,
    Some luck made self,
    So share your wealth.

    You keep us on the outside of the fence you're building up,
    Is your heart still beating now?

    Alright... I wanna make everything...

    There's a man on the street
    Who told me...
    "Hey, everything will be alright,
    If I'm alright,
    Help those who can't help themselves,
    Don't enable, I'm not saying to enable,
    You must achieve convenience in this world,
    So stand them up."
    I said "You worked so hard for your...
    Brand new parking lot,
    And your stolen shopping cart,
    It's not yours,
    But if it keeps you movin' along, then it's alright.
    He said "Is it sacreligious
    To say that I feel like Jesus,
    Carrying my epitaph
    Over my back
    While you laugh
    And throw stones at me?"

    You keep us on the outside of the fence you're building up
    Is your heart still beating now?

    And if along the way you find fortune
    Could you send me a portion?
    I'll be waiting, if your heart's still bleeding?
    And if along the way you find heaven
    Could you send me a postcard?
    I'll be waiting, If your heart's still beating...

    Alright... I wanna make everything...




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 01:08:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is quite an interesting piece touching upon deeper emotions yet not revealing any one in specific. This speaks of changes that has occured and people being left out from those changes and being missunderstood in your ways. This piece is like a mixture of emotions positive and not, like it moves back and forth. This would make a cool song by the way. Thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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