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    dots Submission Name: Let It Bedots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 1018
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    Description:
       This came about due to feeling displaced at my first year at college.


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    dotsLet It Bedots
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    We stand undefined
    Struggling to understand
    To reconcile existence
    Within our own lives
    Trying to shape eternity
    And equate infinity

    We vainly struggle
    Against the unfathomable
    Like children trying to
    Deduce physics
    We are the dreamers of life
    The philosophers of being

    This is our Tao
    As much as it is our koan
    There are no wrong answers
    Nor are there right ones
    There is to merely
    Be




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 09:45:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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