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My friends


Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77 /57 /29
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My friends


All my friends are either hurt or dead
And I am the same way
Although we don't show it much
We are depressed every day

It tears me apart inside
To see them like this

So here's to you

Connie
Gabe
Brian
Ashley
Jeff
Kaela
Kristin
Chaz
Hannah
Zach





Submitted on 2009-08-25 09:50:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you should put my name on it!!! JK good poem.
| Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm sitting beside you,
from day to day.
Your just you,
and that plan good to me.
Your a sweet dude,
sorry about your pain.

LOVE YOU
-Connie!!!
| Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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