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    dots Submission Name: Nothing Sacreddots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 630
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 404



    Description:
       I'm getting ready for college and I've been cleaning out a lot of my old notebooks. 'lo and behold, I find this little bugger. I can't recall what I was thinking then or what I was writing on...shame to say.

    But I think I can still recall on some level what my driving point was...thus the title. Everything has its end.


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    dotsNothing Sacreddots
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    Pervading darkness
    Devouring light
    Like ink on a page
    Absorbing the white
    Spreading and suffocating
    Strangling the refuges
    Of remaining grounds
    Purity eroding
    To the grind of entropy
    Decay eating like cancer
    Corrupting this little piece
    This ember of sacred fire
    Burning into a black flame
    Casting all in shadows




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 10:09:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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