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Aren't You Clever?


Author: AeThe Lost Poet
ASL Info:    19/M/DE
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Words: 140
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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Based of the song by laurie webb.....


Aren't You Clever?


As if to turn back the clock
or the hands of time
my past flash
before me in a Pantomime,
my life, a movie
with no sound to play
so I can un-proudly say
this what I found today

there are things I wish I did
though I didn’t
I heart I wish I had
that just isn’t
words to say sorry
to oppose my flaws
while my heart that just isn’t
will just close my jaws
so this is my sorries,
and this is how it must be
I know you don't want this
but it’ll make you happy, trust me…
I’m sad for the moment…
and maybe… 4evr
“the way you leave me in the dark…
aren’t you clever?”

My heart speaks riddles,
the only way it knows how
I wish it wouldn’t




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