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    dots Submission Name: sing to medots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    Elite Ratio:    2.61 - 218/287/297
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 35
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       "i know i'm outside of your window with my radio"
    -niki fm-
    by:hawthrone heights


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    dotssing to medots
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    i always here.
    i never left you know?
    im singing in your head.
    im there on the radio.

    don't change the station.
    you might not here me fall.
    deeper in love.
    im giving it my all.

    you sing along.
    don't let me leave.
    im playing our song.
    sing it to me.




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 12:07:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       I love u 2 baby, i was woundering what that sound was, a little off key but dam...

    | Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by cshv | [ Reply to This ]


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