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    dots Submission Name: life without lovedots

    Author: darkonesgirl
    ASL Info:    21/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 233/245/125
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotslife without lovedots

    what is life
    without love
    can it be anything good
    i dont think so
    how could anything
    be good without
    the best emotion
    known to man
    my life would be lost
    without the love
    i feel and recieve
    from the most
    gentlist and sweetist
    man in my life
    so no i could never
    imagine my life
    without love

    Submitted on 2009-08-25 12:57:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's nice to know.
    A very lovely poem
    I like it when people
    write from their heart.

    Bobby K.
    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]

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