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    dots Submission Name: The Path of the Holydots
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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsThe Path of the Holydots
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    The Hill of Holiness
    Is a Mountain
    I made the mistake-
    Of trying to climb
    In a day.

    It's one of my many sins.

    I take for granted
    The difficulties I face
    And let them simmer
    On my heart
    Not as a fuel for strength
    Or a recognition
    That I am on the path to Holiness

    But as a failure
    I see myself.



    No more should I
    Be my greatest adversary.
    No more should I
    Deny the Lord's mercy
    With my shame.

    Let my sufferings sustain me
    Forever.




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 16:17:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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