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    dots Submission Name: The One Called Boyfrienddots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 566
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 852



    Description:
       So it's been a very long time since I've written, so this is the first poem in months.


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    dotsThe One Called Boyfrienddots
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    The one you try to tell everything to,
    When you have something big to tell.
    The one who holds you tight,
    And makes all the problems disappear.
    The one who holds your hand,
    Just to make you feel special.
    The one that makes you smile,
    Because he sees youíre having a bad day.
    The one that sneaks up behind you,
    Only to surprise you.
    The one you get angry with,
    Even though itís not even his fault.
    The one who tries to make it better,
    Though itís all in your head.
    The one who cares,
    If youíre sad and crying.
    The one who finds a sweater for you
    In order to keep you warm.
    The one you can never forget,
    When theyíre gone the longest.
    The one who means a lot to you,
    So you call them your boyfriend.




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 18:49:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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