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    dots Submission Name: "Repertoire"dots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 548
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 882



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    dots"Repertoire"dots
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    Chalice standing near capacity
    Factors of emotive filling in congress.
    Prerogative of release in murky trial
    Requested sanity stands ignored.
    Dare you try survive this?

    Feelings freed flee to paper.
    Cup of madness to digress
    Else a request for cancer.
    Being quivers, turning leechless.
    You can't run away from yourself.

    Relief claws into versatility
    Emotions rooted avoid embodiment.
    Songs released slay malcontent.
    Soothed in knowing i can be real
    Touching truth ever elusive.

    Hearts grow healed not by hands
    Rebirth sparked, by letting go.
    Core of crying reverts to innocence.
    Webs striate regrouping strands.

    Gears of seizure never known
    Undefiled contentment in gull's bellow.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 20:38:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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