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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Spoof/What you did
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    I have chosen a different path for myself,
    I am no longer caught up within your thoughts,
    your ideas of myself!

    I will no longer harp over the what if's, and could have been's!
    You did what you did!
    You let me down and there is not much more to it.

    With this I have sanity,
    I have my life back
    within my grasp I feel it!

    I am over you,
    I am over your lies,
    your betrayal...

    Yes, you are my Mother and always will be.
    Nevertheless you are no longer my tormentor,
    for I will not allow it!
    No longer will you willingly or unwillingly control my life.

    This is my life, Mother
    Not yours!!!




    Submitted on 2009-08-26 01:16:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's the spirit! Some things it's best to just "block out" and move on. Seek what's best for you, and take thought and actions that will pave the way for your personal success! You must first help yourself before you will ever be able to help others!

    Nice write!
    | Posted on 2009-08-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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