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    dots Submission Name: Mirrorsdots

    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I see you,
    everywhere I go.
    I know,
    of who you are...

    But I really hate you;
    can't stop wanting to:
    hurt you.
    Such a disgusting,

    You know,
    you deserve it.

    You see me,
    everywhere I go,
    and you know-
    that I am nothing...

    And I can't tell;
    never even thought:
    what you thought,
    about me.

    I never really cared,
    to see you standing there.
    So I just close,
    my eyes...

    But no matter what I do,
    I'm standing:
    in front of you,
    and you just won't go,

    My arms won't work;
    they just,
    limply lay there,
    at my sides...
    And you just stand there too,
    mocking me.

    Everywhere I go,
    there you are;
    looking at me,
    like I'm disgusting.
    A fat pig,
    and you hate me,
    because I am nothing...

    I want to hurt you,
    because you are:
    so stupid,
    so ungrateful,
    and so damn ugly...

    Break you,
    break me.
    As my arms limply lay there.
    Cut you:
    I bleed...
    You look at me and scream.
    But I just can't hear her,
    and I can't do a thing;
    but walk away,
    from these mirrors...

    Submitted on 2009-08-26 14:27:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a bit extreme without being very profound. Enough, eh? I am too old for you but I like your verse, please write verse for the next 100 years.
    | Posted on 2013-03-17 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      There are too few people happy with themselves, unfortunately, so I really relate to what you're saying. The Cosmetic Surgery boom shows us that, although if you think that fixing your sagging eyelids will perfect your existence on this blue planet, I think personally you need to have a brain implanted while they have you under the anesthesia... (sagging eyelids, drooping breasts, baggy bottom... whatever) We are a nation of Inhuman Humans with skin-deep happiness stitched on our faces.

    Nothing is more beautiful that various imperfections... otherwise, it's all just a field of yellow boring flowers, and everyone is the same Pamela Anderson prototype.
    | Posted on 2009-08-29 00:00:00 | by jezracrow | [ Reply to This ]

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