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    Author: DarkPoetByron
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    When a Soldier Falls

    When a soldier falls
    his heart has died
    and all he loved is sacrificed
    but with his passing
    poeple mourn
    and talk about this fallen soul

    but in this pain there is regret
    and longing eyes and tears of fret
    for if he made it through his life
    where would he be in tear filled eyes

    When a soldier dies, his soul is gone
    a hollow shell of crimson bone
    And as inferno takes his flesh
    he is guided by their prayers

    So this soldier burns in hell
    Forever scorned by those he loved.
    He died protecting what he loved
    But by one bullet the lights went out

    So he fell and met his end
    All thats remembered is his name
    A man who stood for a cause he loved
    a broken man who died for love.

    The Dark Poet Byron

    I have looked at my life and saw it play out like a movie on a reel. I'm sorry for everything I have done in my life. For all I couldnt change.
    For being human and making mistakes. For not being able to be the man i wish i was. For not being able to see how much i miss you...
    For wishing i wasnt me or even looked like me. To be someone even i could be proud of. For wanting to go back to that moment and relive it again, just one last time.
    I'm sorry for saying these words because they hurt me to say them. I'm truly sorry for being Byron.




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