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    dots Submission Name: I'm not scared to say it.dots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 292
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsI'm not scared to say it.dots
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    There's not alot you can do but stay strong for those that you love and those that love you. it seems so hard, but there's not a single reason to tell someone i hate you if they ever meant anything to you. you'll always wonder how they're doing even if you barely care.

    There's a bit in your heart that still feels for them, don't let anyone go from your life because you know deep down they wouldn't do it to you. This goes out to everyone who ever got hurt, lied to, cheated on or deceived. We all know no one is perfect and humans make mistakes, it's inevitable.

    Don't remove people from your heart because of what they say or do because no matter what you can't remove them from your past. I know at one point they made you smile, you gave them a hug and said I love you, you can't take it back.

    This is for everyone I've ever known, people I've met once or people I see everyday, no matter who you are you'll always be part of my life story, you will all atleast have your own chapter, some a whole volume, but none of you will just be a footnote.

    People's lives aren't an asterisk so don't dismiss them for the people they are, we're all special and we all have a story to tell, listen and you'll see that everyone matters.

    There's not a way to put it into words, so I'll go by saying I love you all, no matter how we treated each other, I will still wonder what you dream of and hope you're happy, I'm not scared to say it, I love you all.




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      So true. Even when someone very close hurts you really bad, you still think of them and wonder. It is hard at times to care but it never goes away. Very well written. You'll make people think, which is often a good thing.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]


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