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Submission Name:
Forest Fires
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Author:
col13x
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Poetry/Love
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Forest Fires
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Forest Fires
To be the torch
Which lit this fire
Perhaps was not your intention
To lay your balm
Upon my soul of ash
And breathe love back into its embers
If but then you sought the same as me
For a heart so desperately in need
To prove it was not broken
We burnt that love in flames of flesh
And drown for a time in its searing heat
But knew the truth of a fingers touch
Would never reach
The hope of larva’s burning
So before this chill sets within my bones
And before the last sob
Of my tourniquet throat
As I pace the edge of forest fires
Where my home of coals is waiting
There will be no more tears to fall upon this love
No more dusts to receive the scorching marks
No more nights of agony in pyres of blood
No more incendiaries of amber lanterns lit
I will turn to dark
And melting wax
Where the poetry of unrequited love
Had its moment of recognition
To be the torch
That lit your fire
Perhaps was not my intention
To lay my balm
Upon your soul of ash
And breathe love back into its embers
If but then you sought the same as me
For a heart so desperately in need
To prove it was not broken
We saw for a time every wish could be
In the bonfire of a memory
We saw how love could really be
And we new the dance was not a dream
But between us lay the forest fires
And its chill fingers
Of separation
And now to turn upon the empty night
And look into another’s eyes
And try to see
What the dreams could be
Without love to ignite them
Submitted on 2009-08-28 07:27:45
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