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    dots Submission Name: Jane Can't Spelldots
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    Author: therealmojymo
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 11/5/2
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       If you can't spell, you know your computer WILL do it for you... unless you're just too fucking "STOOPID" to find the button, or you're too drunk to give a fuck.


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    dotsJane Can't Spelldots
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    Jane can't spell "Go to Hell!"
    without leaving out an "L"
    "Go to Hel" is how Jane spells
    Her spell-check must not work well!

    Or does she not know how to click
    the icon TOOLS to locate it?
    Or is it that she doesn't care
    and just throws letters everywhere?

    Is it the pills? Is it the booze?
    What makes this junkie prone to lose?
    Or could it be, she thinks she's "fine"
    and turns deaf ears time after time?

    Or does she feel the English language
    is as muddled as her brain is?
    Does she think it's cute to fight,
    instead of just writing things right?

    Oh well, young children on the site
    will always tell her that she's right,
    and you can look back in 3 years...
    I bet her errors are still here.




    Submitted on 2009-08-28 08:13:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Gee... I don't know. I tried to make the poem as [censored]ty as the stupid dried cunt [censored] (totojane03) that is was written about...

    After all, a bad speller doesn't deserve anything other than a bad poem, huh? (Or as Jane would say, "hu"?)
    | Posted on 2009-08-30 00:00:00 | by therealmojymo | [ Reply to This ]
      Commentary type requested: Unspecified

    Well I have only read the comments given by others but I shall give my unbiased review....

    1. Pathetic and forced rhyming and no sense as a poem at all.
    2. Nice work if this is NOT a poem.....(Change the style from poem to verses/thoughts...something else but definitely not a poem)
    3. Who the hell is Jane?
    4. I am not pissed off as i see others are somehow. Its rudely put up, but in all manners you have definitely expressed what you felt towards Jane.(whoever she may be)
    5. Try redefining what is currently misspelled as a poem in your brain to something else.
    | Posted on 2009-08-29 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ]
      so tell me something.
    did you suddenly decide hey! I'm going to push other people down? look i know im young.
    but here's the thing. picking on someone to make yourself seem smarter or better..yeah..not working so well.
    I liked your poetry...but honestly...
    I didn't like the way you attacked her. she has been nothing but sweet to everyone. and maybe her spelling isn't the best. hell. my spelling isn't the best. but thats what learning and writing does. and i'm sorry you are that arrogant that you think anyone who can't spell is (in your words)...a druggie or a drunk or stupid. I'm sorry that you think you are better than everyone. cus atleast i know what it is like to re-fix a poem and it turns out better than before. or to re-write a song and love it.
    and don't screw with people's emotions. how would you feel if I found something that hurt you and you wrote your feelings down and I just came and said "all you do is promise to kill yourself...why don't you?" so you know what .
    I feel so sorry for your arrogant ass. cus while you're big and high by yourself. I'm down and low with my friends. nice work. idoit!
    -rachel-
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey JANE...
    Here's a list of new "freinds" for you to go thank and bother. Youre Almost Famous now, [censored]. Use it to make friends who will teach you how to SPELL.

    1 Question: Did you change your name to Jane cuz it was easier to spell? Just curious to know if you started out as a "Georgianna" or a "Charise" or something, and just couldn't hack it.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by therealmojymo | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite honestly, I don't think that's even a word.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      The only thing that offends me is how badly it's written. As parody it's not funny, as poetry it's barely thought out and I guess as an elite skills poem it will do fine. But really, a horrible lack of a proper rhyming scheme, forced rhymes wherever one finds them and a dis-jointed confused motiff turn this into a real stinker. You said nothing in the poem that wasn't in your description allready. Nonsense.

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, this is really mean.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      so what if she has errors? are you an infallible human dictionary with super godlike powers? each to their own i say, but posting demeaning, offensive stuff like this merely shows you for what you are: vindictive, jealous and rather obsessive-compulsive about other's lives.

    would you like some catty nutter harping on at you about every single mistake? perhaps she doesn't give a flying hoot what you think?

    grow up. move on.
    and smell some flowers for chrissakes.


    moo.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]


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