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    dots Submission Name: Double Lovedots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 389



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    dotsDouble Lovedots
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    Double Love

    Iím Confused because I love you
    But I love you too
    You are different people
    You might become friends
    I love you because your cute
    I love you because I know you
    One was hidden
    One I made come true
    Double bubble of love
    It might not be all true love
    ButÖ.
    I love you two





    Submitted on 2009-08-28 08:51:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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