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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    darkness falls across the land,
    one quick slice across her hand,
    an innocent scream,
    an evil laugh,
    both are one,
    half and half,
    16 and afraid of fear,
    screaming and no one near,
    darkness falls across the land,
    seen only as a shadow,
    the evil man

    Submitted on 2009-08-28 12:26:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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