This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17. It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different. All content will be deleted. Backup anything important. --- Staff
|
|
I remember Mexico without you, a rain-scented suitcase of cotton lies tossed overboard in deep waters, your watch and handgun later traded for a bag of red mangoes and fresh sandals on shady back roads behind Tapa's Bar near that lonely beach in Costa Maya. I became a summer stray, roaming the island with wild dogs and curious children, an oddity spotted by waving fishermen on teal mornings before the next boat sailing to Guardalavaca finally came. I remember Cuba without you, a new sundress with cash from your wallet before I kissed the oiled black leather and threw that last piece of you away. Adios, amor, gracias por la nueva ropa y el paseo libre... lastima que no sabía nadar. |
this makes me ache so much. the images you conjure, so bittersweet - yet, by not tasting those memories, how can life ever be complete? beautiful, beautiful piece. | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ] | Oh, apart from being impertinent (below), I want to tell you that I like your free verse a lot, a lot. I just go by how it sounds, not by what it means; and this verse sounds so good, I think you must be good at it. | | Posted on 2009-08-30 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ] | I theenk you needing a new woman, my friend? | | Posted on 2009-08-30 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ] | |