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    dots Submission Name: The Angel And The Beastdots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       A poem about a past lover and how she made me feel.

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    dotsThe Angel And The Beastdots

    The beast lurks within.
    No one can see him.
    He lives under my skin..
    I sometimes forget about it.
    He is clever and full of witt..
    I was fighting with it alone
    trying to make it be gone..

    Then she came to me..
    Never knowing
    How scary i could be..
    Still she spoke to me.
    Killing it softly..
    Setting me free..

    I know not where it goes
    But surely you heal me.
    Chasing out all woes..
    Draining my sorrows.
    Why do you love me?
    No one knows..

    Loving you is easy.
    My mind is in control..
    No longer hazy.
    I know you are wonderful..
    Sorry im sometimes crazy.
    To you ill stay dutiful..
    These words are no blasphemy..
    To me you are so beautiful.
    Together forever..
    You and me.

    For the hurts ive caused
    Forgive me.
    Sometimes i react lost.
    I know you are meant
    For me.
    To complete my soul.
    To set me free
    Is your greatest goal.

    Thankyou sweet love
    You must have
    Been sent from above
    And before time is spent
    I want to give you
    All of my love.

    The beast from within
    Can no longer grin.
    You are beside me..
    How can i thank thee?
    My sweet princess
    You saved me..
    Loving in excess..
    Never giving less.
    If theres one..
    Chosen to bless
    God will pick you..
    I must confess.


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