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    dots Submission Name: Dark Manipulationdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 466
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    Bytes: 1208



    Description:
       A poem about dark influences in our lives that we sometimes cannot see.


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    dotsDark Manipulationdots
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    This is how it goes...
    It changes normal words into woes.
    It can discolor the reddest rose.
    Nobody can explain
    All the things it knows.
    It waits for its moment
    To enter the gates.
    It is so evil...
    It never stops the wheel...
    It only hates.

    What is it?
    Who created it?
    It destroys everything bit by bit.
    Who made this bright dark glow?
    Capable of devouring every rainbow .
    I know it is there...
    It is everywhere.

    To destroy this darkness
    Is impossible.
    Your efforts couldn't mean less.
    Soon you will feel its evil glory.
    Soon you too will feel worthless.
    This is not new...
    It has plagued all of history...
    From the beginning is where it grew.

    You can beat this dark seed.
    All you need is a beautiful deed.
    To keep it far away..
    To keep it at bay.
    Keeping it at a distance
    Is not so easy at first glance..
    But keeping your cause just
    Is the only way to outsmart it.
    In this i place trust..
    Lest you join the dear departed.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-08-29 04:01:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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