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    dots Submission Name: The Darkdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Darkdots
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    Black witches -
    The last of kin..
    Little children -
    All raised in sin..
    Silently they lie in wait
    Scarred faces emanating hate..

    Pure souls they prey on first..
    No carnage satisfies their thirst..
    Slowly..benevolently..they gain trust..
    Incognito - their cause unjust..
    No amount of woe
    Quenches their bloodlust..

    All once children of the pentecost..
    Long gone souls now black and lost..
    Their presence seems unreal - ethereal..
    Don't doubt.
    They are real - surreal..

    Trust them
    It's already too late..
    When the hour strikes
    They will seal your fate.

    -Svw




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