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    dots Submission Name: The Mirror Facedots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 771
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       Man can be the master chameleon of all expressions.


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    dotsThe Mirror Facedots
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    Man - a favourite mimicker of smiles and life.
    Such a fraudulent conception to the grave.
    Easily trading soul for wealth to bypass strife.
    Motivation by grief shows us how to behave.
    Monarchs of misery & pioneers of pain,onwards we pave...

    They say things change and change is inevitable.
    This being true anything can be believable.
    But we do not believe, to us seeing is believing..
    Our foundations based on greed, never giving...
    Differences exist between living and making a living.

    Such a creative colorful cancer we are.
    Slowly bringing earth's destruction to par.
    Can the learning curve conquer our mistakes?
    I don't really think we have what it takes..
    Always mimicking truth from amongst the fakes.
    To some of us living is a crime.

    I'm sure anything can change with time.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-08-29 04:04:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Long live Capitalism... it brings us back to our primal natures of greed, avarice, arrogance and pride.
    Wild beast hearts disguised by tailored suits in Banking backgrounds... committing murder on paper, sucking that green blood money through their venomous fangs until each victim runs dry...

    I blame Reagan, The Deregulator, but he was only their trojan horse. The real problem is White Redneck Mentality out of control. It's no longer just a southern thing... it's become the GOP's lifeblood.

    And I am in full agreement that humanity is Nature's cancer. But Nature wins in the end... she always does.
    | Posted on 2009-08-29 00:00:00 | by jezracrow | [ Reply to This ]


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