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    dots Submission Name: Pure Inner Paindots
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    Author: M. Crazy Eight
    ASL Info:    19/Male
    Elite Ratio:    1.24 - 9/29/64
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 529



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    dotsPure Inner Paindots
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    Porcelain, white
    My hate, your blight
    I’ll see it through
    My pure ingénue

    Scarlet, silk
    Diluted by filth
    I’ll see it through
    My pure ingénue

    Empty, saved
    Eight, engraved
    Purity in pain
    Love in disdain

    A knife is a medium
    My strife, your delirium
    I’ve seen it through
    You’ll see it too

    Delved, dug
    A push, a shove
    I’ve seen it through
    And bid you adieu




    Submitted on 2009-08-29 09:16:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The brevity of it actually adds to it, and the pace is consistant. Rhyming couplets galore, which is lovely.
    It's got a few elements hanging, which leaves the readers wondering; not exactly wanting to know more, but at the same time, wanting to.
    I could relate to a good number of the elements, strangely enough.
    This, folks, is what can be called a textbook example of a good set of poetry.
    | Posted on 2009-09-02 00:00:00 | by Omio | [ Reply to This ]



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