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    dots Submission Name: Pure Blissdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 24/34/22
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 689



    Description:
       One of those feel-good poems, hope you enjoy!


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    dotsPure Blissdots
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    Can't ever of imagined a place like this,
    Full of magic, wonder, serenity and bliss.

    The sunshines brightly, with the gentle wind,
    The warm comfortable rays, soak up in your skin.

    The red orange leaves, rattles and sings.
    Watching late butterflies, fluttering their wings.

    Just lying there, on a carpet of grass,
    Taking in sweet air and watching creative clouds pass.

    The sky turns ebony, twinkling with lights,
    Like a merry tree, on cool christmas nights.

    Sighing contently as your stress finally melts away.
    Oh, if only this could last one more beautiful day.




    Submitted on 2009-08-30 12:35:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked this a lot.
    "The sunshines brightly, with the gentle wind," sun shines should be seperated.
    you had really good analogies. once again really simple and a good write
    | Posted on 2009-09-18 00:00:00 | by FadedSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      I can feel your words, I can see the images. Nice.
    | Posted on 2009-08-31 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice. Lovely to imagine. I like the description 'creative clouds'. Are you, like me, one who can see pictures in the sky? Wonderful isn't it.
    | Posted on 2009-08-31 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]



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