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    dots Submission Name: Static Waydots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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       A poem about the set ways of man and the influences we have on our surroundings.

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    dotsStatic Waydots

    How will the world end?
    Will it leave a big rend?
    The answer is easily found..
    Just take a look around..

    Mankind need not make room
    For any kind of doom..
    from manknd will be born
    The source of earth's scorn..

    The devil deals out his cards
    Assigning man 6 deadly parts..
    Death to life..
    Destruction of earth
    Famine for all..
    End to birth..
    Hate blanket us all..
    Ensure our steady fall..

    Man built economy
    to help us all..
    We reach the summit..
    Ready to plummet..
    Incommensurate attempts to level the wall
    Mankind trying feebly to break his fall..

    Symbols with rings
    Conceal these things..
    The secrets of the end-all trade..
    Man-a small child making grade..

    So what can be learnt from this dispersion?
    Do not fear what is near - there's no aversion..
    Shed some skin..
    End times to regard..
    Do what you need
    To play the final part..

    No longer near..
    It is here..
    Time for crimson display..
    It is the static way.


    Submitted on 2009-08-30 13:30:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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