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    dots Submission Name: Tears of...dots
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    Author: WickedJester
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 0/2/28
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTears of...dots
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    Tears of obvious happiness extended into the night(She said she loved me)
    Her beauty radiates happiness, it is the perfect sight(I want no one else)
    He was content and life was finally whole(We planned for the best)
    he couldn't help but cry, his heart she stole(I was finally in love)

    She said I love you, She always meant it(every time it brings a smile to me)
    His love for her was just the same, he always admit(My tears of joy)
    He can't stop his laughter(She was always there to make me smile)
    His life is now perfect, from here and after(She was my pefection)

    I will always love you(Even though I cannot stop my tears)
    I cry as I am going through(thoughts of your beautiful face)
    Tell me you love me for ever and once more(It makes my tears feel alright)
    Your beauty and love, is what I adore(my forevered happiness)

    [We fight about who loves eachother more. But we both know, we can't beat infinity]




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