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    dots Submission Name: Within Medots
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    Author: Zai
    ASL Info:    19/m/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 45/81/63
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 43
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1232



    Description:
       The words are pretty much set in stone. The only changes I'd make regard the number of times the chorus is sung or something like that, that varies with each play.


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    dotsWithin Medots
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    V1:
    Today I said that I was happy,
    Weird thing is I really meant it.
    Happened in a small church concert,
    Singing music from the spirit.

    PC1:
    Channeled father, channeled son,
    Who brought forgiveness from above.
    Keep the music flowing freely,
    Show the spirit from within me.

    Chorus:
    I believe that I am happy,
    I believe that I can.
    'Cause I know what is within me,
    It's the father, spirit, son.

    V2:
    Today I said that I was happy,
    Tomorrow I know I'll be glad.
    'Cause when the next hell strikes towards me
    I'll have something to be had

    PC2:
    It's the rhythm, it's the beat,
    That keeps me sheltered from the heat,
    But keeps me warm when life gets cold.
    In darkest valleys I am whole.

    [Chorus]

    Bridge [X2]:
    In the darkest valleys, in the coldest winters,
    In the strongest winds, in the rushing waters.
    You are my holy rock, You are my pulsing rhythm,
    You are the brilliance in me, and You are where I need you.

    [Chorus, Chorus]




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