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    dots Submission Name: Devil in Disguisedots
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    Author: lostalien
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 2/1/2
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Story/Religious
    Total Views: 39
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    Description:
       hi this is my first one i submitted. it's more of story than poetry but i wanted to post something write now and this is my only finished one, all my other writings are just notes not put together yet. I wrote this 2 weeks ago when i had in-school suspension, just passing the time by.

    um not really much of a story behind the song, basically my thoughts in a story.


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    dotsDevil in Disguisedots
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    "Do you believe in god Johnny"
    "No"
    "Why not?"

    "How can i believe in a so called man who could walk on water, turn water into wine and heal the sick with his bear hands?"

    "It's all real Johhny"
    "Fuck off, none if it is real"
    "Would you like to speak with him?"
    "Sure why not?"

    "Hello Jonnny"
    "Fuck you"
    "Why do you not believe?"
    "Because your not fucking real"
    "Not real?

    "Yeah, that's right your not real"
    "Your nothing"
    "Just an empty vaas"
    "Nothin"
    "A vacant paddock"
    "Nothin"
    "You are acid"
    "Just an intense imagination of the mind"
    "Nothin"

    "If there was a god"
    "He'd be the devil"
    "The devil in disguise"




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