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It's too early


Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77 /57 /29
Words: 137
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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It's too early



OH! Shit
I've done it again.
There are more scars
There's more blood on the blade
I didn't even realize it
Until it was
TOO LATE

It's never too late
To feel the pain
It's always too early
TO LIVE

OH! Shit
I've done it again
There was a fight
Yelling and screaming
I didn't even realize it
Until it was
TOO LATE

It's never too late
To feel the pain
It's always too early
TO LIVE

I CAN"T TAKE IT
ANYMOORREEE
IT"S GONNA END
TONIIGGHTTT
IT'LL RING THROUGH THE
NIIIGHHHT
I CAN"T WAIT FOR
IIITTTTT
IT"S GONNA END
TONIIGGHTTT

It's never too late
To end it all
Never too late
To take a fall
It's too early
To give
It's too early
To live




Submitted on 2009-08-31 16:44:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow its weird how you start it with OH SHIT. Interesting.
| Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]


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