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    dots Submission Name: Silly Dreamsdots
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    Author: totojane03
    ASL Info:    25- colorado springs
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 151/77/35
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSilly Dreamsdots
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    I awoke in my dream last night,
    When the world drew quiet,
    And the stars had fallen asleep,
    A place where my heart is at ease,
    And my memories there do not trouble me,
    Because there is so much peace.

    A place where the lighthouse,
    Brighten's the blue sky,
    And there isn't a cloud in sight,
    The ocean waters are still,
    Even when there is a slight breeze,
    Blowing the windmill.

    It never gets really dark there,
    And when the morning comes,
    It's never sad to part,
    Because just waking up with you next to me,
    Is more important then any silly dream,
    Your my Angel, and my everything.




    Submitted on 2009-08-31 17:17:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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