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    dots Submission Name: The Black Rosedots
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    Author: ShadowHarlequin
    ASL Info:    17/m/Etheral plane
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 22/31/14
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 525
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    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       Rage and Hate can kill oh so many things including this rose.


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    dotsThe Black Rosedots
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    The rose has turned black
    Blackened by hate
    It's life long ago become slack
    Slackened by time and fate
    What once was red
    Red as blood
    Is now dead
    Drowned in a flood
    A flood of anger and of rage
    That killed it so slow
    Trapped in a cage
    Nowhere else to go
    All love and passion was lost
    Slowly drained away
    Cold as early morning frost
    The once find curves began to fray
    And all hope and love was lost
    In the end it just froze
    In the cold of rage and hate
    Along time ago was to late
    For what now is The Black Rose

    ShadowHarlequin
    18/01/03




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      interesting approach to this, i really like it. when i read it what comes in my mind is that there is someone out there(perhaps it's you) that feels so dead inside from all the s**t of life and all the people that degrade others. there may have been a time within this life that this person could have been saved, but people are so damn cold hearted that in the end it killed their souls.** am i even close?
    | Posted on 2004-11-16 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it a lot. The repeating stuff is kind of jarring, but the ending is gorgeous. ~Cora
    | Posted on 2003-11-09 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]



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