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    dots Submission Name: How Long is Foreverdots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 168/155/63
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 703



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    dotsHow Long is Foreverdots
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    Pains of forever, trapped in a mindless universe
    Pleasurable forever, trapped in eternal bliss
    Elongated pain brings the curse,
    While fruits of one’s labor ignites a kiss

    How long will we stand, how long will we cry.
    Will life bring us fortune or just pass us by.
    Solitude amongst friends could bring promise or deceit.
    Loving hugs from grandma makes a baby’s soul complete.

    Is forever that long, can our souls be that strong?
    Will God’s love prevail and eternity be paradise?
    Bring love to your neighbors doorstep, honor mother and father.
    Or pay tribute to Lucifer, ensuring eternal pain and strife.




    Submitted on 2009-08-31 22:56:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wonderful!...forever, nanosecond or an eternity. Everyone hopes for eternal bliss. Beautifully written.










    danica
    | Posted on 2009-09-02 00:00:00 | by larkspur | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice enjoyable poem as the first person said. short and interesting,.

    Thanks
    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed your poem. This is a wonderful forum to express ourselves, receive feedback and encourage others. Well done.
    | Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by merletemple | [ Reply to This ]



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