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    dots Submission Name: Freedomdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFreedomdots
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    Freedom has never come to me
    I’ve been imprisoned
    By thoughts, ideals, and expectations
    For longer than I can remember
    And I just pray
    That someday
    I can break free.

    Freedom from standards
    From rules, from pain
    Has been my desire
    For longer than I can remember
    And although I pray,
    I know
    I cant break free.




    Submitted on 2009-09-01 07:21:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not if my pain is caused by love. then it just hurts a thousand times over.
    | Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by dthforeverpain8 | [ Reply to This ]
      There is no freedom from pain. We all have it, sometimes more, sometimes less. We all have to live with rules, what kind of a world would it be if we didn't have agreed on rules to keep those in check who do not respect others rights to be free of violence, theft and other crime. Some try to find an answer in drugs, some in sex, some withdraw into themselves. The answer is love. When you love you are free.
    | Posted on 2009-09-01 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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