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    dots Submission Name: why couldnt youdots
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    Author: vlarrimore
    ASL Info:    20/female/tampa
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 37/22/16
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    Daddy oh daddy
    Kiss to make me feel loved
    A touch to make me feel secure
    A look to make me feel beautiful
    A smile to make me feel happy

    Daddy no daddy
    A yell to make me feel scared
    A temper to make me walk away
    A stair to make me give in

    Daddy what did I do
    A bruise to make me do it no more
    And Words repeated to make me feel less of a women

    I cant get out I love him so
    He is my heart
    he is my soul
    He is my life
    And I cant lose that
    He said he wont hurt me no more
    That I’m safe with him and we’ll go back to the way things were

    Daddy oh daddy
    his kiss that made me feel loved
    his touch that made me feel secured
    his look that made me feel beautiful
    his smile that made me feel happy

    That was all good for awhile then I said no and his smile turned upside down
    I didn’t mean it
    I should of done what he wanted

    But now I’m safe and peaceful
    6 feet under

    Daddy oh daddy
    why couldn’t you just love me






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