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    dots Submission Name: Letter To My Soulmatedots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 574
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    Bytes: 1572



    Description:
       An old poem to an old love.


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    dotsLetter To My Soulmatedots
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    Where do i begin? Where do i start?
    Saying this is not easy. This is not art.
    It's just me explaining a new way of meaning.
    The essence remaining the same from beginning.
    So i'll try refraining this you in different speaking.

    You were created for me to complete me again.
    In past lives we made vows to reunite at end.
    As a thought needs drive to function the train
    so anew destiny's web forms our strand to mend.
    This is me to you-a siamese section fining the grain.

    Because your mold is mine and my heart is yours
    no-one can ever be meant for me than you ofcourse.
    Nothing else can even be brought near comparison.
    Oh! May your substance be the minutes of my hours.
    Naught can imprison or defile sacred souls in unison.

    Beware: Love so pure can put the dark eye to lure.
    Nothing's supposed to be perfect in the black system.
    Remember: We will suffer many attacks for tandem.
    Always lean on my love when you need to be sure.
    By ourselves inflicted - standing together's the cure.

    My alpha to my omega of ancient soul's direction:
    do not leave my side for i'll collapse onto myself.
    My armoured heart needs your tender filling of affection.
    I take you not for granted for it's loneliness i will delve.
    Only your swift guidance leads me to act with discretion.
    Together through the never two fates dissolve.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-09-03 04:03:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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