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Letting it out


Author: wolfgurl830
ASL Info:    18/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42 /38 /34
Words: 48
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 768
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 303



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Letting it out




Its a feeling that you can’t let go
That’s piled inside you
Curling inside you
You want to let it out
Just tell the world
Then everything will happen like you want it
And you’ll be ok
What is that feeling?
Its too many to say




Submitted on 2009-09-03 08:51:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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