Letting it out

Author: wolfgurl830 ASL Info:    18/F/OH Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42 /38 /34 Words: 48

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Letting it out

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Its a feeling that you can’t let go That’s piled inside you Curling inside you You want to let it out Just tell the world Then everything will happen like you want it And you’ll be ok What is that feeling? Its too many to say

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