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    dots Submission Name: A Shaft of Moonlightdots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsA Shaft of Moonlightdots
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    A shaft of moonlight shows things for what they truly are.
    When you stand in one, all i see is a beautiful, lonely angel.
    With pure white wings and a beautiful face.
    Someone who has a tender voice and is looking for someone to comfort them.
    When you stand in the moonlight, I see a girl who wants to be loved, a beautiful person waiting to be accepted.
    I accept you, your beauty, your sadness, and all else that comes with you.
    Because to me, making you feel better, is worth all the pain in the world.




    Submitted on 2009-09-03 22:03:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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