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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 324
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRememberdots
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    It's a small beat that generates heat.
    it's like an ember that no one remembers
    that started the fire that started our desire.
    it could have been lust, but it lead to trust.
    it all started off great, we had so much to relate
    We were the same, and her picture i framed.
    and by the simple turn of a string, my heart began to sing
    her name, that had cause such a strong flame
    such a joyful feeling. My god, my soul was healing!
    and even though time passed, we had a blast.
    so I no longer look back with hate, but rather I think it was great.
    I learned so much with a single touch.
    I learned not to hide in the dark forever, but rather give an act of endeavor.
    But yet I can't help but feel that it was unreal.
    Like a missing piece, something that leads to peace.
    A gaping hole left in my soul.
    When will I feel whole and my life control?
    I ask a lot, but only to make up all I forgot.
    Sometimes I forget the day we met.
    How I was so scared and you seemed to care.
    But I often wonder, where you my thunder?
    you're caring voice allows me to rejoice
    like a fuel that makes me feel cool.
    I gained inner strength, an arm's length.
    I was stronger, weak no longer.
    And who had all the due? Why, it was you.
    But you know, I was so slow.
    To ignore the facts and relax.
    Regardless, in the end I lost a friend
    Someone so dear that left a tear
    In the pits of my heart which was torn apart.
    To love or hate. Add my love became abate.
    Eventually the hate won out without a doubt.
    Y ahora te quiero cantar, y mandar
    verses filled with curses.
    Porque te rojo te ves bien, compina con tus hojos y tu piel.




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 00:47:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      seems to be an honest recording of thoughts. No editing?

    Fine! it is not something strained, displeasing, intimidatingly intellectual stuff. it is exactly the opposite, if intellectual can be contrasted with emotional.

    if you don't mind i'd like to disagree at one point... hate never wins even when it seems so because hate is the other name of some kind of loss and loss can't win.

    only a thought!!!

    Enjoyed this flux, yes really it is a lot like my most precious lost friend's writing. no, i don't question its originality but it does strike a chord
    | Posted on 2009-09-06 00:00:00 | by loveforever | [ Reply to This ]


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