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    dots Submission Name: But yetdots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBut yetdots
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    the rain pours down,
    and my soul hits the ground.
    Allow me to drown
    and to never be found.

    How in the world can I stay?
    Sitting here, waiting for you
    How in the world can I stay?
    Collecting dust, thinking of you.

    But yet...
    But yet...
    the mere thought of moving away from you
    It sends chills up my spine...

    Who would take your place? Really, who?!
    everyone I meet, my heart gladly declines.
    It's like if my heart is stuck ..
    and it refuses to move on.

    I can feel my heart drop
    and my life is slowly gone
    I shouldn't let this be!
    I should try to move forth!

    But yet...
    But yet...
    I'm stuck on this dream
    This dream that should not be...

    Of me and you,
    in the way my heart seeks...
    the sky turns blue
    and together we spend weeks...

    But I know it isn't so....




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      I havent seen anything like this in a while! It is definately refreshing to find. I would love to be able to rhym like this but it doesnt come to me.

    Great write.

    Buster
    | Posted on 2010-03-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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