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    dots Submission Name: Call it Karmadots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCall it Karmadots
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    So, this is my fate
    that so much fear create
    Who would have guessed
    that I be obsessed
    with the dreaded past
    and what we were.

    So, how can you call it karma?
    when so pain you have done.
    How can you think it's just
    and that everything had to be must.
    Yet, with the knife you stuck in,
    your end will soon begin

    So lookin' at the weather,
    I turn to look back
    to when we were together
    and what we lack.
    Then come the emotions
    and I remember the oceans
    that I once, to you cried
    and no matter how I tried
    our "love" would not revive

    So, how is it karma
    when I have it so harda?
    and although I can love again
    that I do not wish to attain
    because, how can I ever trust
    a race, a being I consider unjust?

    So, keep blaming the rain
    and ignoring others pain
    But with your selfish actions
    you'll end up falling,
    and I'll watch in satisfaction
    as you're sanity hits the railing.

    So, how can this not be karma?
    When finally over is the drama
    your end you have finally met
    and now I have a reason to forget.
    No more regrets, no more hate
    I can finally set my life straight.
    Now, that is a just fate.




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 00:50:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool! Though i don't believe so much in karma !!!I used to, sorry!!! or perhaps this is overwhelming confusion... don't know.

    But definitely this poem has something attractive about it. May be it is anger that seethes like background music!

    In any case, by my own experience and suffering,i can tell you that dead love can never be revived. Because love never dies in the first place.. anything that dies does not deserve to be called love even in retrospect.

    this poem is a very personal piece. Atleast, it seems so. without the context, readers can only relate with it at this or that level.

    I can call it nice. and hope that it helped you to deal with emotions that were troubling you. Writing heals, right?
    | Posted on 2009-09-04 00:00:00 | by loveforever | [ Reply to This ]


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