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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsrandom :Pdots
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    A Perpetual sorrow
    that lies in their marrow
    Sending chills up their spine
    Almost like fear every time
    Why does heartbreak have such effect?
    Don't we know no one is perfect?
    We all search for our scarlet flower
    Yet all we find is a taste so sour
    Why does love lead to despair?
    and also lead to no where...
    what ever happened to the damsel in distress?
    Who's arm we would constantly lay a rest,
    Does the word "gentleman" mean nothing nowadays?
    Has our efforts gone to waste?




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 00:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that is incredibly cool!! You took random things and turned it in to wonderful poetry!!
    that's omething i love to see..love ya and keep up the writing i will continue to read more!!
    | Posted on 2010-02-04 00:00:00 | by gothgirl101 | [ Reply to This ]


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