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    dots Submission Name: en espanol! :Odots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 249
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsen espanol! :Odots
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    Mi corazon te grita
    Mis labios mencionan tu nombre
    Pero tu ya tienes otro hombre,
    que te lleva mas ariba
    Y yo no logro alcancarte con mi amor!

    Ya no puedo n dia mas sin ti
    Sin tu a un lado de mi
    mi vida regresa al ayer
    y ya no se que hacer
    Pues, la vida asi duele
    Y mi corazon se muere

    Mi corazon te grita
    Mis labios mencionan tu nombre
    pero ya no se que hacer!
    Solo verte junto a el,
    ya no lo quiero creer!

    Y perdoname, yo me resito a verte junto a el
    Olvidame! Mejor regrasa a su lado otra vez
    Y dejame, a morir con una respidad
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    translation:

    My heart yells to you,
    my lips mention your name
    But you have another guy
    Who takes you higher
    And with my love, I'm unable to reach you

    I can't take one more day without you
    Without you by my side
    My life returns to what it was
    And I don't know what to do
    For life like this hurts
    and my heart begins to die

    And my heart yells to you
    my lips mention your name
    but I don't know what to do
    Only seeing you by his side....
    I don't want to believe it

    Forgive me, I refuse to see you with him
    Forget me, it's better if you return to his side
    and leave me, to die with one final breath




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 00:57:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well I don't speak spanish but I loved the english translation. i can relate. what I like the most is the ending " and leave me, to die with one final breath" it makes the ending have significance. I'd say this is a good piece.
    | Posted on 2009-11-05 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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