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    dots Submission Name: Midnight on Christmasdots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    dotsMidnight on Christmasdots
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    On the calm, quiet evening of the day,
    i watch the sun set behind the golden horizon.
    Watching as the last golden rays light the world,
    Then all of a sudden, the rays vanish,
    Leaving nothing but the beautiful star-filled sky.
    As the stars begin to glow one by one,
    i see in the sky the flakes of pure white.
    It is the first snow of the season.
    Falling silently, beautifully from the heavens,
    The beautiful stars and snow surrounds me,
    lifting me up as if on air and twirling softly around me.
    I stare at the beautiful sights of the darkened world,
    the Christmas spirit surrounding me,
    the pure white snow resting on my head,
    the beautiful purple and blue streaked clouds,
    and the sounds of the night,
    The sights and sounds of a midnight on Christmas.




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