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    dots Submission Name: One Persondots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsOne Persondots
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    On this world there is but one person to love,
    with only one person to feel you are safe from the world.
    Only one person to feel at home with,
    To feel the most comfortable with.
    There is but one person on earth who you can be that close to,
    Only one to make you feel that loved.
    The one person for which you feel nothing but love and respect for,
    The only person you have eyes and feelings for.
    There is only one person like that for each of us,
    Have you found yours, cause i did.





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