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    dots Submission Name: This Momentdots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
    Elite Ratio:    0.99 - 1/2/13
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThis Momentdots
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    I've been waiting all my life for this,
    For this moment in time.
    The wait has been long and ruff, but it was worth it.
    For now is the moment in my life where the truth will be realized,
    I'll be happier then Iíve ever been.
    For this is the moment in time for me to shine.
    All my life i've been waiting,
    Well Iím through with waiting,
    Through with following other people.
    Now Iím the one on top, the one in the spotlight.
    I've been waiting a long time for this,
    And the moment has finally come.
    What would you do?




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 06:56:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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