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    dots Submission Name: Who am I?dots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    dotsWho am I?dots
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    Am I a real person,
    Is this reality, or a dream?
    How do you tell if this is real or not?
    Can you be so sure your actually awake and now asleep?
    Can you believe this is a reality and we actually exist?
    What if this was just someone elseís dream and they wake up?
    What can you do when you wake up to make sure your awake?
    How can you be sure we're not just someone elseís imagination?
    Do we really have options, or is everything laid out for us?
    Do we have a destiny, or fate?
    What if we donít have choices?
    What could you do if no one was with you?
    What would you do if someone suddenly told you they loved you?
    What would you do?





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