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    dots Submission Name: Donítdots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsDonítdots
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    Donít stop because someone tells you to stop...
    Keep believing...
    Donít forget because someone told you to...
    Remember...
    Donít stop being who you are because someone doesnít like it...
    Be yourself....
    Donít stop loving someone because they donít realize you love them...
    Believe they will notice...
    Donít break under pressure from others...
    Be Strong....
    Donít take anything for granted...
    Be thankful.....
    Most importantly....
    Donít let go of the people you feel close to...
    Stay together.....




    Submitted on 2009-09-04 06:57:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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