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    dots Submission Name: The Moon and the Starsdots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsThe Moon and the Starsdots
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    For all who are part of the nighttime charade of gazing
    Let the meaningful glances of the earth's realm commence.
    Let the people who inhabit this world become peaceful.
    Let all life become calm and quiet, waiting, as if in slumber.
    Let the world become a soundless place of love and beauty.
    Let the earth shine in it's own light and shine with an inner beauty.
    Let all know what happens when the harsh sun's light dissipates.
    Let them know the beauty of the night, of the darkness.
    Let them know no fear as they walk the dark paths of twilight.
    Let them find the courage to face the dark fears within themselves.
    Let them find inner peace as they gaze at the heavens.
    And let them find their true selves in the visions of the Moon and the Stars.





    Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:00:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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