Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ForestShadow325
    Elite Ratio:    0.99 - 1/2/13
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 489
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1040



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Angeldots
    -------------------------------------------



    The sound of her voice the beating of her heart.
    The way I feel for her so passionately.
    The way I feel for her makes me wonder if there is a reason.
    Why I love and feel for her the way I do.
    Should I give her my answer or wait until I meet some one new.
    But for me she is my one and only.
    Someone I wish to share my life with.
    Now is forever and forever is a life time.
    So make it your all and donít let any one tell you otherwise.
    Because all you need to do is trust your heart and soul.
    Only they can lead you into greatness and glory.
    Thanks to her my cup shall never empty for she is my wine.
    No longer will my heart be tainted, for she is my cure.
    Now I found her and she has found me.
    No longer am I lost in the darkness of this world.
    She is my light and I shall follow her.
    My love shall not be judged.
    I will not listen to there opinions.
    I have my own to think about.






    Submitted on 2009-09-04 07:00:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    178144

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Live In Between written by teika5
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry