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    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
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    Author: ForestShadow325
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    Words: 199
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    dotsMy Angeldots
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    The sound of her voice the beating of her heart.
    The way I feel for her so passionately.
    The way I feel for her makes me wonder if there is a reason.
    Why I love and feel for her the way I do.
    Should I give her my answer or wait until I meet some one new.
    But for me she is my one and only.
    Someone I wish to share my life with.
    Now is forever and forever is a life time.
    So make it your all and don’t let any one tell you otherwise.
    Because all you need to do is trust your heart and soul.
    Only they can lead you into greatness and glory.
    Thanks to her my cup shall never empty for she is my wine.
    No longer will my heart be tainted, for she is my cure.
    Now I found her and she has found me.
    No longer am I lost in the darkness of this world.
    She is my light and I shall follow her.
    My love shall not be judged.
    I will not listen to there opinions.
    I have my own to think about.






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